Friday, March 19, 2021
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Hi Orion this is a good example of what a good blog post is.
ReplyDeleteIt would have been good if you added the think 6 in. I enjoined how you told then to not to share their last name.
From Lucas
Hi Orion, I like your background and your characters! Next time maybe you could make the speech bubbles bigger. Thanks, Henry
ReplyDeleteHi Orion, Its Sree from Toroa. I really loved the way you used speech bubbles to make it more descriptive. This reminded me of my first ever blog post. Next time try and make the speech bubbles a bit bigger and check your spelling. I still loved it.
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